About Hands on Stanzas
Monday, April 28, 2008
Anxious Blues; Upbeat Raps
Muzzammill R.
7th Grade, Room 109
Recycling
There are many ways we can use
Reduce and Reuse
Another way is recycling
No cars but bicycling
Stop polluting the air
We should have a day called earth care
Factories, busses, tracks, and motorcycles
Start using solar powered transportations--recycle
Start reusing, start recycling
And if you can’t do it, stop blabbing
A ton of paper can save 17 trees
You can be a hero if you wanna be
Plant some trees if you can
Trash bags go in the trash can
Make the earth green
By keeping it clean
Lois G.
7th Grade, Room 109
My Sad Talking Blues
Nothing to talk about
But I talk too much
Nothing to talk ‘bout
Yep, I said I talk too much
I get in trouble with my teachers
Can't walk but I talk lame, way too much.
Shouldn’t talk at all
Tape & zip my mouth
Shouldn’t talk at all
Tape and zip my mouth
With my split personalities
I should move down south.
Nothing to talk ‘bout
Shouldn’t talk at all
Nothing’ to talk ‘bout
I shouldn’t talk at all
But I talk too much, so tape and zip my mouth
And just like me fall!
Ahmad A.
7th Grade, Room 112
What You Fight For
My mama always said be careful what you fight for
Battles open windows but peace opens doors
Every day on the news
Teens go out for a cruise
Soon one gets shot & it gives you the bues
And always during night some kids get in a fight
They won’t stop won’t drop
Such a pitiful sight
When one of them get into critical height
It soon becomes serious and you can tell I’m right
Racism & evil only come from jealousy
And soon the anger becomes a felony
What I’m trying to say is just have it your w ay
But be careful what you fight for
& have a good day
Peace out war in y’all!
Ciahara S.
8th Grade, Room 124
No Good News Blues
Monday I got suspended
For no reason at all
I’m tired of this stupid school
And I can’t wait to next fall
Cause I got the blues
I got the blues
Silly girls trying to fight me
For some stupid stuff
These girls have no reason
They’re just trying to be tough
Cause I got the blues
O yeah I got them blues
The spring is coming
The winter is gone
Can’t wait till school’s over
So I can party all night long
I got the blues
Oh yeah I got the blues
I got the blues
And lately I ain’t there cause
There ain’t been no good news
Jia H.
7th Grade, Room 112
Violence
Our government sponsors all war and hate
Don’t think no lawyer can argue this debate
Born where Al Capone lived, I know I can relate
Our world will die out soon at this brutal rate
Those ghetto gangs waiting for the kill
They lost all faith, all goodness, all power of will
They got no real gun fighting skills
These bloody streets are making me ill
All this violence got no reason, no rhyme
One day we’ll all run out of time
The trees won’t grow and the sun won’t shine
And into this dark world we’ll be confined
Javeria N.
7th Grade, Room 109
Loneliness
My name is loneliness
I am a sorrow
That has many attitudes
I am at home
All alone, left in your dome
I am a very sad feeling
That is always left alone
Like a very lonely smelling cologne
That is never used
And left alone
Yet I follow almost everyone
One by one
At a time almost everyone needs me
I don’t stay for long
I just come & go
It’s like a heavy emotion
It makes your heart rip
It’s the worst thing ever
And its called being lonely.
Juritzy H.
7th Grade, Room 109
Fighting with My Friends
Having fights with my Friends
It’s a horrible thing
Having fights with my friends
It’s a horrible thing
It gets me upset--I say
The bad thing is it’s raining.
When we try to talk to each other
We ignore each other’s voices
When we try to talk to each other
We ignore each other’s voices
And feel like crying with sadness
Yet make the difficult choices.
Dorothy M.
7th Grade, Room 112
No More
This world is depressing
This world’s not safe anymore.
It’s true this world’s depressing
It’s just not safe anymore
And every single person here
Is like a rotten apple core.
Judgements don’t care about ya
And war don’t care about me
Judgements don’t care about ya
And war never cared about me.
The leaders are letting this slip by
And wave us off like fleas.
This world is dying
Near its end its true.
I said this world is dying!
It’s near its end--it’s true.
There’s no salvation ready there
And there’s nothing left to do.
So tell those close that you love them
And forgive the people you can
Tell those close you love them
Forgive the people that you can.
For this world is heading nowhere
TO THE PROMISED LAND!!?
Amelia S.
8th Grade, Room 124
Book Fair
Runnin’ low on stuff to read
Gotta get me some sustenance
My mind starts to bleed
& other dire consequence
Been savin’ my dough
Since the day I turned fo’
Gotta buy me some book to entertain my mind
If I wait too much longer, I’m finna unwind
I’m finally there--a feast to behold
Got books & books seem through visions of gold
All this info’s played out to my likeness
Entertainment so valuable, fit for your highness
Wednesday, April 9, 2008
DADA DADA DADA DADA DADA DADA DADA DADA DADA DADA DADA DADADADADADADADADADADA
The DADA poem allows you to see yourself in the newspaper; it reflects your own "unique qualities" (about which Tzara & John Cage & Jackson Mac Low & I remain happily uncertain) back to you in a haze of half-understanding.
Long Live D A D A !
These poems by my 7th & 8th graders prove the case w/out forcing it into foreclosure; like Tzara's poetry, they preserve the case by postponing it:
Michael F.
8th Grade, Room 124
Mr. Bush didn’t discuss policy, but
the event reflected how housing and
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President Bush, under pressure
from congressional Democrats to do
more to help the troubled housing sec-
VOLUNTARY PROGRAM
MORTGAGES To
form, Republican may be open
to some kind of compromise,
given the severity of the fore-
closure problem and political
pressures.
The White House and Demo-
crats in both houses of Congress have
tor, touted results from his administra-
YCOA
7-8 Days All-Inclusive
First Class
While the bill has little pros-
pect of passing in its current
Narda O.
7th Grade, Room 112
Domestic Life
People treasure gangster money
It’s fascinating how The arms look fragile enough to snap
LOUISVEILLE CENTER CAN’T begin work
I can’t afford hot dogs sold from carts
watching operas on TV is very typical of us
The company offers new malls
class is empty
Sabir A.
7th Grade, Room 112
CLIMB WALL IN NEPAL not winning
suits high and unhid
With things in flight;
To what end does this easy and cry
Shut and gone
of a small ere be miracles)
at a kiss
the same time.
bride increased—In Arizona
has hit a wall.
Fruitless, the fruit of mine own flesh
Obama
nuclear
head
blind, war
swallowed me that in mindless passion
there is no substance at all.
Rigoberto A.
7th Grade, Room 109
3 DADA Poems:
1.
“This morning I woke up and walked
out, turned the key and there was a noise
People who might have
thought their lives had nothing to do with
Exactly how much depends on the size
2.
let him tell you, in its Underwear and the wife
was “sexy looking” at extremely high temperatures.
with vivid description of hot flashes
3.
Selling stolen converters to Whoopie Goldberg with John Stewart.
it’s “really expensive” the way things are set up
in a very big city
Fausto S.
7th Grade, Room 109
learned to taunt cops into hitting
criminal skills to the side of law
secrets from a fallen woman
of Soviet agents. Smirkingly
mark is Skip McCoy, a
and a shadowy new cold war had
him, as a way of invalidating
workers, prompting police to chase
Sheriff Joseph L. Mankiew
great swamp of moral ambiguity
merable bogus complaints.
In the fall, four states in the American
grants, a state that is the nation’s busiest
not a single reported citation. Not even
where in the middle—in that
gateway for illegal crossings, imagine
where those that placed him some
can’t find a single lawbreaker in a state
there have been thousands of
ruining businesses.
Latinos. Books for only three months. But if they
that four years of active conflict
And don’t forget: since 1986, it’s been
Hall of Fame.
Maryam K.
7th Grade, Room 109
Before/After
A faint echo of the
2002 sniper attacks
that terrorized the
stops with a jolt,
turns off his lights,
did you ever try to get around a girdle
women. Why should women be
required to know the names of flowers
Dethroned; dispraised, disseated; and my mind
with friends, she recom
mends against sharing prob
lems, saying it is best
toward--& naming the passage time or
Perhaps Non-Violent Action
Who can or could be can be sure
mixed into anesthetic, and drove it home.
Monday, March 10, 2008
Found Poems & the Future of the Language
Here are some wonderful poems written in this way by 8th graders at Clinton. See if you can figure out what word the students first found. And remember that, even though each poem has a name attached to it, that's not the author's name. It's the name of the person who discovered the poem. These students are not writers in the normal sense of the word, they are explorers. They are exploring the future of the language.
Angela F.
Reply everyone patience like you
Love on vivid experience
Care a risk excuse
Joyful open year felt unable least
Worry obviously rather relax yet
Ciahara S.
Angry now good right yet.
Insisted night seen I see today extra disguise.
Patient and then I enjoy new time.
Rock on closer knock.
Quiet unicorn in every town.
Walls are long life sound.
Shakil A.
Some of muddy even
From railroad of mountain
Some out mighty every
Jose D.
Hunts Uruk-Lai now tracks soldier
Now oily water
Mordor on rattling dun orc Rams
Bilbo is lowlands bag old
Michael F.
Custom ubiquitious streamlined their ounce merchants
Around rockers on useful new displacement
Ford over Rams drivetrain
Do H.
Popular or psycho us like all really
Imad K.
Carefully attacking
robbers entertaining
us luckily left
yawning
Taha M.
Harry argument roared roared you
Potter of threaten tolerate especially robes
Hogwarts of good waiting a rapturously then should
Fahad A.
Many answers nag you
Dumb under many brains
Atomic trains out mined incredible characters
Fears erased American redscare
President resigns entering seaside independent diner exerting nuclear turds
No outbreaks
Brown rooms orange washers nightly
Trouble rises out under blue lighting egos
Wasif O.
Emergency mason extra reading gun expert now case yellow
Knife novella in flight enough
Amelia S.
Rolling out lightly land is now Gandolf
Striking then rise in killing in gospel
Tobacco others business as companies competition other
Numan K.
Dragon reptile at geometric orchestra normal
Electron life ear contest takeoff radiation on nucleus
Dan M.
Treebend roused exclaimed escapes
beggar eerie a road design
Holler one little like else rouge
Converse experience not vertical ever rapid sell equality
Elisabeth P.
Hold on like during
Dwarf will and remembered frightened
Martin admit returned tires it night
Lidia G.
Jewel echo war enough land
Abducting bishop don’t up conversations to it not gently
Dog out great
Speak photograph entrance as known
Liam inserted another map
Tiger increased growth enough remembered
Vinny L.
Alone: lake often no everything
House: how often us stare end
Chapter: cottage how all part together every rumbling
Chill: horseman in last long
Gray: riders at yes
Ricky B.
astonishment suddenly to out not in
secret how my ear next time I
marching earn a right not open
through how ray on up go now
happen or were enemy rule emperor
me perhaps end roll on rate at to
end not do on new elder well
earn later low open window in no
door over
Saad S.
Crude roaches establish devious establishments
Lycanthropy yields cannons and notifies the
nasty roaches on partly yapping
Transformed roaches are now snooping filthily on roads
minding educated drivers
Corrugated online roaches race unidentified gullying
and tracking educated drivers
Caleb P.
Morris:
Man own Rebecca remembered it said
Mineral:
Minerals in narrow evaporate rock a limestone
Bibiana B.
Listen
Lucas called a university
Seeing university clubs
looking like us
And something looks uncomfortable
Say Christ’s choice
Acting stranger and childish
Smoked like a supposed ciggy
Used little Cait
Shrug
Light uproariously left
Lucas slung undeniably
A car sitting until used
So likely unpredictability
Laughed saying Urrp
Leaned up unmasked
Unknown child
Confused loneliness
Crying
Changing a cottage
Listen
Ela K.
Blood like on ordered Diesel
Overgrown venturing east realized grass raking over wheezing Nature
Wrists remember it strained the storage
Steven T.
Terrible ego round rat in bed late excuse
Within ill tree hearken inside nature
So orange
Remember each month eat mango buy every resource
Bad apple death
Seyabend S.
Whatever her aunt told everybody viciously everybody runs
Open peoples everybody neighbor
Home of many everybody
Tuesday, February 5, 2008
Between a Dream and Reality
Poetry is therefore neither the dream nor the world of nine to five. It thrives in the space between sleeping and being awake. It is the cusp of the dream, the recollected dream. The terrible unknown written down. The exploration, during daylight, of the nightmare lands.
Here are thirteen poems about nightmares.
Marisol L.
7th Grade, Room 109
Bipolar Screams
Bump, Bump, Bump. I’m coming!
No, no, no, it’s the __________.
Thump, thump, thump—I’m here!
Huh, huh, huh (breaths)—I’m awake!
Drip, drip, drip, gulp, gulp, gulp.
Rinse, rinse, rinse—back to bed.
(Springs, springs, springs) OK. I’m
comfortable. Snore, snore, snore Zzzs, Zzzs, Zzz.
Stop, ________ stop, stop, STOP!
No don’t hurt me, please! No, oh
no, no ________ is coming. Wake, wake
wake! I’m not waking! Wake
WAKE! Body, body, body, it’s me
the brain wakes up __________
coming! Coming, coming, coming—here
__________’s here. Open eyes. Open eyes!
Eyes open. NOOOOOOOO!
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! Mom & dad thank you
for the sirens. __________ stopped
the voice stopped.
7th Grade, Room 109
Deep Dark Language
thundering—the booming sound
the sound of lament from the trees
shaking heavenly with ancient frights—
contagious colds. With fire; comes
and goes, like a fire fearing dragon.
Echoing every untold man’s dreams
having shimmers, scary. Seeing buzzes
beyond Peace.
Chills like a frightened horse,
Can’t be able to feel the day light
but the releases of heartbeats faster
and faster and faster; then suddenly
a spark of light that is shot in the air
so fast like a firework.
Alarming dreams of peace and
Myths.
Evelyn R.
7th Grade, Room 109
My heart beating faster and faster.
I’m dying, feel hopeless with fear.
I can hear.
please tell me what you see
tell me what you hear—
I’m full of fear.
I feel the darkness.
I’m screaming
And I’m awake.
7th Grade, Room 109
So deep and so cold it felt
I was scared when I fell
As I try to get out of my terrible well
Danzel J.
hard to breath, killing me
slowly but with fear—
it’s like it’s real
can’t say anything
you can’t scream for help
knowing but then not knowing
what’s going to happen next
lament thinking that you’re about
to die you wake to the sunlight
Javeria N.
7th Grade, Room 109
In the lonely hours of night
So many emotions go through my head:
Afraid, alone, scared, but not quite
I look up and see that stars accompany me:
So bright, so powerful, making emotions fade away.
7th Grade, Room 109
Flowing as I stand in the middle
Of a dark, lost space. All alone
And terrified.
Has just left me. Fear and sadness
Has rounded up on me. I feel
As if I would never leave this terrifying place.
My heart beats so fast. I scream
But only hear my voice echo back as
I suddenly wake. I find out it was
only a nightmare and find myself
in the comfort of my room.
Narda O.
7th Grade, Room 112
The rusty metal from a roller coaster as it freezes
on the upside down hill.
Commotion down below as the belts come loose.
One hour later, sirens down below.
But I wake with a panic, taking breaths
in a puddle of sweat, and I’m back in line.
7th Grade, Room 112
Grief and sorrow was heard
The sound of a heart bleeding to be saved
The plane was going fast
The clock of my life ticking to an end
Slowly I gave up hope
My ears went deaf trying to block the cries
Tears drained through my cheekbones
The dark water hit the ground like bullets
The sand is draining
Each grain of sand hitting the glass
One grain only is left to fall
One last shout is heard, then all is silence.
Ahmad A.
7th Grade, Room 112
As darkness shines a man becomes anew
As he walks toward me a fright pierces the night—
From darkness his face come free.
And I soon realize that it’s me.
Richard T.
7th Grade, Room 112
A figured and grin step from the shadows.
Each step the shadow takes, I think of death.
Fear strikes with a blade and so does consciousness
I feel a disorder but can’t awake.
The figure strikes my heart but I’m not dead.
I’m stuck and cursed to endure this longer.
When will it ever end, when will it stop?
I try to break out of this dark nightmare.
With confusion I come to this conclusion:
I’m stuck in the dark, shadowy, scary dream world!
Amar A.
7th Grade, Room 112
The thought still at the top of my head—
floating there, just wobbling in the air
overhead. Whatever I do it just wanders
upon my head like a streaming river. I awake.
I realize the rays of light upon my
textured face due to the fact of it being morning.
Then while I regain and regather my thoughts
I realize that it was a dream. A blank
but oh so powerful thought toward life.
Something sitting, staring in your mind.
7th Grade, Room 112
The cricket chirps
as I wake to a clatter.
My robe slips on as I thud downstairs,
every creak of the bare wooden floor following after.
There in the kitchen appeared a woman as pale as the day was,
bustling in the kitchen with her tawny black hair and all.
She turned around, following with her the sounds of a door creaking.
There she appeared, with no face, but only a bloody, spattered skull.
My screaming could do no good, seeming that as I looked about
the world resolved within a red sky.
The hall swished around me & swirled as I swayed about,
only then falling endlessly into a pit, just dropping to my death.
A scream escaped my mouth & I jumped under the covers.
To this day, the lady in my dream still hovers
just as I drift right back off into that world of nightmares.
Sunday, January 6, 2008
"His heart was shattered to the brim"
The answer clearly has to do with poetry's close proximity to death. Between the word that the bird keeps squawking (Nevermore!) and the death of the woman whose name so conveniently rhymes with raven-talk (Lenore) lies the imagination. Poe's poem locates it for us as a story and locates it musically--as the space between rhymes. The poem is a portal into the imagination because it measures our distance between the mysterious, confusing present and the ultimately unimaginable death of the future.
Here are several poems by 8th graders at DeWitt Clinton, Room 124, who learn the fundamentals evoked by Poe's poem:
Jose
Destroyed
They came in the dead of night
They were fast and swift
We had no chance to put up a fight
This was not a fun gift
Families—destroyed
Now we are forced to flee
Some of us climbed up a tree
Out we are heading, towards the sea—
Why couldn’t they let us be?
Friendships—destroyed
On the boat many have died
In the sun many have fried.
Doesn’t look like we’re making it home.
And I think I’m beginning to see gnomes.
Hope—destroyed.
In a village where no one would pillage
there lived a man who would never tan
his pale white face would withstand any mace
be even he, tempter of tempters
could not resist the taste of blood.
His name was Nosferatu—
a vampire of the French sort.
He yearned for his love, to find his love
but none were suitors from above.
He walked and walked, to the ends of the earth
looking for his love, his love from above.
He found his love during a tranquil meeting:
a winged seraph from heaven landed like a dove.
But his love did not want him.
His heart was shattered to the brim.
He lived his last days, calling for her in vain
and yet she did not come.
My mama told me to take care of her vase.
I told her I wouldn’t lose it.
I told her that it would be OK with me
For at least some many days.
The next day I couldn’t hear, breath, or see.
I found out that I’d lost the vase.
I went to my sister and annoyed her with this—
She told me to get out of her face
And to save the whole drama
By going straight to tell mama.
And so I went to go and tell her.
I thought to myself that it would be better
If I just told her
But I worried that if it was lost forever
There would be storms in my weather.
I wondered what she’d do if I were a bird—
If she’d pluck out all my feathers.
You try to find another truth—
It’s like trying to find a free booth—
You will find nothing but torment
Since there’s only one truth.
What’s done is done. Nothing can change that.
You try to bring back loved ones
But it’s like an eternal run—
It’s never going to ever work
& your anger will make you a jerk.
What’s done is done. Nothing can change that.
When two towers become really weak
Nothing will hold it—not even the peak.
When they fall, we say “What’s done is done.”
When they say this, they’ll also say
“Nothing can change that.”
The torment you will only find
Will make a demon that put’s you in a bind.
What happens to you is done.
What’s done is done
and nothing can change that.
Shadow Man
The shadow man stood alone in his tunnel of hope
He was lonely in the world and sad
And not having a companion made him mad.
In his dark tunnel he did nothing but mope.
This is what he did in his tunnel of hope.
The man’s only friend was his shadow,
Which never left him except at night.
The shadow was created by the reflecting light.
The man’s only belongings were a knife and rope.
This is what happened in his tunnel of hope.
The days were the same and night went alright.
The shadow man enjoyed being in the sun.
The heat being down made everything more fun.
His life was nothing close to an opera of soap.
This is what happened in his tunnel of hope.
The world meant nothing to the shadow man—
His reason to live was to stand there and smoke.
That’s all he could do because he was broke.
His grocery shopping was to buy a six-pack of dope.
That’s what happened in his tunnel of hope.
One day the shadow never joined the man in the tunnel.
Never in twenty-seven years had this been!
This was outrageous and like a sin!
The shadow man went mad and hung himself with his rope.
This is how he died in his tunnel of hope.
Amelia S.
Flow
Pound, pound, swim, work.
Dirt harvesting fields are all I come to.
Cross the river for the American dream—
Now I can’t even afford shoes.
Pound, pound, away my fate.
Deportation agent is bordering close.
Faking my blindness, hoping for mercy.
Here comes my paper harvesting host.
Pound, pound, the paper is gone.
And so follows the agent, right behind.
Chasing his paper across the boarder—
Sirens ignite after him, eager to find.
Pound, pound—the paper harvester requests my help.
The metal’s too heavy
For her frail figure—
And so I help her to her Chevy.
Pound, pound, my heart goes wild
And love spirals from the heavens upon us.
Marriage is next, and as time passes
Legality is bestowed upon us.
Chop
An old man in an ancient house
Son and daughter visit
In the entrance there they stop
When they knock they see a mouse
The daughter asks, “what time is it?”
They hear, chop, chop, chop
They walk in and the girl’s mouth pouts
It was time for dinner
The go up the stairs to the top
They hear someone’s shouts—
“Get away from me! I’m not a sinner!”
They hear, chop, chop, chop
They walk in the room
They see the old man
He swings a broom and a mop—
“There’s going to be a big boom!”
He stands by a can
They hear chop, chop, chop
The girl helps him cut the meat
He puts his hand there
Then she chops and there’s a pop—
The cut is very neat—
But it’s the pain he cannot bear
From the chop, chop, chop
“No!” the son yells
The old man’s dead
Then their hearts stop
They hear bells
& noises from the bed
No longer hear chop, chop, chop
Devastated, crying
Daughter begs forgiveness
Her come the cops
She feels like flying
Hoping they have kindness
To forgive her chop, chop chop
Ela K.
The Men on Stilts
Little women trade
Funny little boy looks like Steve Urkel
Boy climbing the tree never afraid
The one on stilts—
Just like a flower, he wilts
People pulling on one another
Men over each other climbing
By the river they’re in the clover
People look like they’re fighting
The other one on stilts—
He also wilts
Long white ribbons wave
Bickering doesn’t look like fun
Do any of these men ever shave?
Men on stilts appear shunned—
Maybe that’s why they’re on stilts?
Maybe that’s why they wilt?
Now I end my story—
I was in the middle of it all
There was nothing gory
Except for all the fighting I saw
It was a she, not a he, on stilts—
‘twas me, who wilts
The House
Alone at night in the dark ebony
Three soldiers there were.
Lost from their army in the jungle
They had no food or a bundle.
They had nothing.
Suspicions were aroused as two came closer.
Soldier number one became the outcast however.
It seemed that out of nowhere they found
A mansion there and nothing more.
He was running out of time.
Entered the house the soldiers all three—
Amazing things were found, giving all glee.
However number one stayed separate from the other two.
At night a horrible event occurred—
He ran out of time.
He heard horrific things so he ran.
His friends he saw in horror.
Dead the two were all over the floor.
Frightened, he ran—but found the doors were locked.
He had run out of time.
Evil beings sprang out of the floor.
Bloodthirsty they were wanting him.
He gave up his life to carnivorous beasts—
Ghosts and such took over him and his life.
He ran out of time.
The soldier’s clock was nevermore—
He had been eaten alive without hope.
Soldier number one was nevermore.
He was never seen ever again.
He ran out of time.